Story Board ideas

Tamasin has proposed a presentation layout which looks rather nice, following the idea of a silent movie in black and white in a power point presentation as you can all see in the emails that have been going around today.
I proposed an alternative way based on Tamasin's idea, following the same principle but presented in a more compact way. It's still Tamasin's idea though, that can still be presented in Powerpoint or PDF as we wish.

Here is my way of presenting it: Black area for image presentation and white area for  titles and text. Yes, it is a template that will be the same as it goes along through the storyboard.

Tamasin's is a power point: - first two pages only. the rest of the presentation is presented in a sequence of Black sheets containing the titles and description and the white sheets containing the images which are sketches, drawings, concepts, etc...

Choose the one you like and then we'll decide which will be our way of presenting our work as a story.